A storm is coming

Not really happy here. Cross had 3 instances of metaphors that didn't really make sense, but were still metaphors. Conflict didn't have any metaphors. Both had broken multis, but cross had less broken multis. Neither had good vocabulary, but Cross used sage. I couldn't find anything on Demis Syringee or Ruffalo pills anywhere I looked, so automatic 1 for using fake words. Neither had instances of wordplay. 

Cross was just slightly better in all categories. Also please highlight only your multis conflict.

Fair vote. If you have any questions dm me.

i feel like conflict got potential but chose to to completley fill da box and wasnt takin the battle serious and cross did the oppositie he got a good flow and punchlines, i think actually have potential. fv.

Cross verse waz little weak,I like conflickwarrior gb

Both of you guys need some serious workon almost every aspect of your writing. While one didnt event attempt to give readability to the voter via capitalzation of rhymes, . ; / !! etc. The other made an attempt but had a broken structure that all of a sudden got complex in the last bar which i found to be, interesting. Tip for both of you, when writng a verse cap what your rhyming and only quote things that directly tie back into what your attempting to make a wordplay on or whatever you may be trying to achieve. Hope that was helpful gents..GONZOvote

my fair vote is tossed fellas

very close