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Chekkit was this battle win vote had a butts thourgho verse gb

LouisV: Since you filled up 1/3 of the space. Your limit on each category is 3. You only had one metaphor, which was the David chapelle metaphor which was poorly used. Laughing would’ve made a far better substitute for giggling. There is a reason why there is the term “giggling like a little bitch”. You didn’t highlight anything, so it’s hard to dissect anything that would be a multi, always uppercase multi’s. However the ones I seen weren’t very good. They break after your third multi. Only first two and last two multi’s rhymed. You had basically no puchlines,and went on a rant describing literal excrement for a good 2 lines. Scat is the only word which is in intermediate vocabulary. I couldn’t find any wordplay.

Chekkit: Needing drugs line and cheating husbands were both good examples of metaphors. Each one of your multi’s kept the same amount of syllables which kept the flow really nice. Not a single broken multi. You had below average vocab though with Impulse,Ping and Fleeting being all intermediate level vocab. You had okay punchlines, with the husbands and drugs lines being my favourites. Only one instance of wordplay.

Fair vote is in.

Tahhaa.. Bias reviews/ from a guy that i chewed.. Lol was that wordplay WOLFCHAINS.. All in all tho.. Thanks for the advice.

Bias reviews? I’m not biased at all mate. The battle clearly says you have to have 8 lines (Usually stops you at the end of 7 lines) In order to participate. You didn’t chew me, we are 1-1 against each other lmao??? Wordplay is when you alter the meaning of words to fit a narrative. Think of it as a double meaning. Chekkit had “fucking around”, you had none. I’m just giving my honest, fair vote.

pretty easy to vote

One needs to read up on the basics, the other did what he needed to do. Realistic ratings. 

Burdens gave me a 1 cuz actually go vote on the battle please  lol 

Sincredible def unfair vote .[bouta chew him)

Wolfchains..Biased reviews from a guy that i chewed lol.. It said 8 bars cause the way i wrote it bro 

Jay diamond wasnt biased [good look]

fair is tossed one needs to finish the verse

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