Feel like MadVerbs got this with one. He had the better punches and built up his bars in a more creative fashion here and was also better in the rhyming department in comparison to Chekkit, who I feel had some spotty rhyming with forced multis and punches that were too obvious to do damage (hittin' a bitch/domestic abuse was super played, as are lines/drug punches). You had a few lines like that as well, Verbs (trip/smoke/sesh was too obvious from the jump), but overall I found you to be more creative and consistent.

( BD - Bone Dead beat him. / BIG BLOCK as in big block motors / Wesley Snipes Movies - Blade, Major League, The Art Of War, Undisputed. - Hotshots is a crew of firefighters & they dig control lines on the ground. )

Expo--- His other Crew (Verbs is the leader) is Barz Ova Bullshit. Jayse and I both left, and joined Red Ribbon Army. It was supposed to be an “Elevation crew”/ Verbatim is repeating something said, in exactly the same words. Word for word. Im against Swordz in the scheme tournament, hes butthurt I’m writing for both at the same time, as opposed to only him. Made a huge deal about the deadline for the LBT being the 20th.

Typo: Verb Ate Em not Verb At Em

I’m not voting between my two friends, but chekkit you spelt ramekin wrong at the end. Also ramekins are clay not metal. And MadVerbs hippies always smoke weed when they have a sesh. Just saying.

Lol Wolfchainz look it up. Metal Rammies are a thing. I work in a kitchen, I know that at least.

And also, you're in one of his crews so thanks for not voting xD

Yeah great battle verse that was posted first,I think madverbs gotta win here gb

His name was madverbs when I posted this

Wow nice fuckin match here! It's times like this that I really appreciate the Beef when I can read or listen and really be entertained thank you both for 4 the hard work. I'm leaning towards Verbs on this but only by an edge it's close Verbs read is real fluid, smooth and punch heavy relevance and consistency also top notch definitely has BOTB with the big blocks in cities double entendre sick Chekkit also had a great drop but relevance was lacking and execution on a bar or 2 was off liked the same deformity line that was dope it's never hate fairs in RESPECT 

Burdens, nice fucking drop. Your opener had a good twist and the punch landed with sting. I felt most of your punches were executed nicely and had quite a bit of impact behind them. Second half of your verse there were some weird wording [He went 'Overboard Floatin Product'] and some lines that didn't hit like the BIG BLOCKS one. However you made up for that with the last 2 bars which I thought were dope. Your main problem in this verse was being a lil inconsistent at times, make sure your wording is natural and clear in every bar. 

Chekkit, I could see where you were going with the opener but the way you executed it wasn't right imo. It's like you was saying he ATE your lines? That line could've been reworded and setup a lot better. Also I saw you wasn't really keeping your setups relevant to your concepts at points in your verse. But the second bar was a lot better though you could've expanded on that idea. Compared to Burdens your 2nd half was better. The wording was better and your ideas were used in a more impactful way. Your problems here were being inconsistent and having bad wording which threw me off a lot.

Overall, I liked this battle cos it was really personal. One was more consistent here tho, had the better punches due to his execution and how he used his concepts. The other wasn't too far behind but he started off badly and then got better, but him being inconsistent and having poor wording cost him this one. Good battle, folks.

Wow this was a good read ft ones punches more here the fair is tossed good shit from both

Ahh ! Thanks for the feedback. I meant for it to come off like "THEYll say Verb Ate 'Em" Like .. the only way he'll eat up bars is copying me .. I 100% understand why it was worded poorly though . Thank you !

Burdens was a bit more thorough here. What I mean by that is his lines were fleshed out and built up a bit better, with more relevant set ups and smoother rhyming. As for the punches themselves, I felt both had a few played out concepts but Chekk had a few more in that department. So with the smoother, more structured and fresher drop, BURDENS gets the fair from me.

THIS WAS ACTUALLY A GOOD READ...... BURDENS WAS FAIRLY CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT, A FEW OF YOUR SET-UPS SEEMED UNFINISHED TO ME THO, THA HIPPIES PART AN THA DAGGERS ON THA WALL WERE THA HIGHLIGHTS.... CHEKKIT ALSO HAD A DECENT SHOWIN, YOU WASNT AS CONSISTANT AS YOUR OPPONANT BUT SOME OF THA GOOD PARTS OF YOUR VERSE HIT HARDER I FELT, I PARTICULARLY LIKED THA ''BACK ON BULLSHIT'' CREWNAME LINE, THA ''DRUG SELLER'' PART WAS AWKWARD THO..... ALL IN ALL BURDENS GETS THA VOTE HERE AS HE WAS MORE CONSISTANT AN EVEN THO I FELT CHEKK HAD A COOUPLE OF HARDER HITS, HIS WEAKER LINES FELL TO FAR BELOW THA CONSISTANCY BAR FOR THA BATTLE...... GOOD READ THO, FAIR IS DROPPED!