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BlackFire911 (29%)

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Crew: Bazooka Slayers

Reppin: Lithonia, Georgia, United States

B a r z o o k a is on FIRE! 10+ wins in a row!

B a r z o o k a (71%) WINNER

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Crew: Black Mesa

Reppin: Schenectady, New York, United States

BlackFire911

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<div>Lil Zooka, Or should I say 2 Gucci/ You don't need a snack because you're bad at what you do Scooby/ I'm about to wazz on every wack rap you do truly/ I'm always on the track, what could this fat rabbit do to me/ You think you own this site 'cause you're tight and your bars are loud and scary/ But I got off the mic just to type to test your vocabulary/ I love to write my bars from the heart, that's just the raps I'm spittin'/ But when I kill you lyrically don't let me catch you acting different</div>
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B a r z o o k a

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<div>Yo, I'm tired as fuck "I wanna go to bed" BUT CHECK IT! I don't need to be awake to "put your mind to rest" rip it open CUT INSPECT IT! This guy is talentless so "as Bnas would say," I DON'T GIVE A FUCK MAN! 'Cuz Jay so bad I can use a shitty line to take 'em out my GUY SHIT OUTTA LUCK FAM!" I called you fam to make you feel more welcomed, but you're not, so WALK OUT THAT DOOR! No one can ever understand what the actual fuck you "flow" about anyways, you TALK CLOUT BUT [YOU'RE] POOR! (Pour) 474 shit yak we out here</div>
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Battle started: March 14^th 2019 at 16:07
Challenger joined: April 5^th 2019 at 00:08

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2019-04-05 00:08:36).

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Kiwi Peewee
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Both rappers verses here had some serious talent, but were held back massively by some easy-to-fix problems.

BlackFire911, you actually had one of the best flows I've seen in a text battle, particularly in your early bars. However, I didn't notice this on my first read through which really took away from the first impression. Try CAPITALISING your multis like Barzooka did here so we can see what is involved in the rhyme, which then tells the reader which syllables are stressed etc. Also a lot of your material didn't hit your opponent directly, or was just kinda basic, especially at the end.

Barzooka you were a lot more vicious at your opponent, but your execution wasn't as clean. You need to make sure your multis are clean. The first step with a multi should be to make sure the syllables match. That didn't happen always in your verse, and that really dented the impact of your punches.

So, at the end of the day, could BlackFire911 live up to their crew name and become a Barzooka Slayer? I thought Barzooka won this battle because his concepts were much harder-hitting, even though his execution wasn't, because although BlackFire's execution was better than Barzooka's it was still quite hampered by formatting and his concepts were much further behind. Good battle!

Posted on: 2019-04-07 18:44:11

Member Comments

BlackFire911 <BZS>	Take that. Comment Only Posted on: 2019-03-14 16:26:49
XxTRUTHxX <TheElite>	Both had some good bars here but overall Fire got this 1 due to his shut was 'Fire' thou he didnt have better multis IMO he did have better punches and flow which got him my vote...GL both... No H8, FV in Voted: BlackFire911 / B a r z o o k a Posted on: 2019-04-05 16:26:57
JayDiamondScarFace	Barzooka,had a better verse Voted: BlackFire911 / B a r z o o k a Posted on: 2019-04-06 14:30:58
ZzEmpty	yee Voted: BlackFire911 / B a r z o o k a Posted on: 2019-04-06 15:58:06
Squammy	Blackfire you have nice rhymes and your syllables are really good. Your lines are the perfect length for this shit to read smoothly, which is more than lots of the people I see on here do (even I'm guilty sometimes). For real dude your vocab and everything is great, just need to work and that wordplay and some heavy punchlines. You've got the fundamentals down. Barzooka yours reads nice and smooth too. Longer syllable rhymes and just a bit more in terms of punchlines, so I'm giving you the W. Both did good here. Voted: BlackFire911 / B a r z o o k a Posted on: 2019-04-06 20:56:26
COOLDUDE	Gotta Say this was pretty close but brazooka had more shots that arent that common so he wins Voted: BlackFire911 / B a r z o o k a Posted on: 2019-04-07 01:17:20
Rai <TheHitmen> LBT King Tag Team Champion	One sniped this n got off as many punches as his opponent did. However he had a batter multi game which ultimately got my vote. Voted: BlackFire911 / B a r z o o k a Posted on: 2019-04-07 02:05:59


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