Expo List: 1: No heat against rieper, I love him and he is my favourite rapper on the site (no homo) but his username is a spelling of “reaper”. 2: The U.S army reserves get called into war very frequently. 3: Sensory nerves are what allows your body to move (or in this case type) so I’m implying he’s spazzing random shit in his diss. 4: Crypopreserves are what rich people put themselves in (only like 10 in use today) to keep their body preserved forever. 5: Unnerved is a play on words here. It means that he: Has his nerves cut so he can’t feel or see anything / Is really scared. 6: Crips and Bloods don’t like each other very much. Both are gangs in the L.A area. 7: last line “you” is supposed to be “your”

Also U.S isn’t part of the multi but it’s customary to capitalize it.

Expo 9: Correction "Knocked senseless like you've just been UNNERVED"

I guess ill break down my bars too...

1. Da choppper is da AK-47 but also if i was a helicoper pilot, i would be maneuvering with the chopper,

2. Watching wordplay on a teleprompter is what reporters do and T.V. Show hosts.

3. Whitney houston movie was the bodguard starring kevin costner.

4. The yappa is another word for choppa (which is a Ak) and it sounds loud like when the fat lady sings

5. Richard simmons was the gay aerobics teacher w the wiggly fingers back in the day

6.Da stick is the long rifle, and soon as it fire people start repenting and get the holy 👻.

7. You tripping, (figuratively speaking) ima catch you slippin so you dont fall

8. Gymnasts flip alot and the gun so big if bullets fly he will flip in the air...

I'm glad I read this better than I expected I'm most certainly Rollin wit LouieV I fux wit the flow plus he got bar of the battle for the Richard simmons line 🔥 Chains you were OK though you should work on ya structure a bit more to smooth out ya flow then the punches will hit harder it's never hate fairs in RESPECT 

Thank you boro!! best believe im gonna come check yo battles out too bro.Good look.

Edging to Louie despite less content. Wolf, the opener doesn’t make any sense to me and even after reading your expo, he’s named after Tobias Rieper, not the grim reaper. Also 100% honesty your shit just didn’t really rhyme at all. You obviously know to cap your Multis but the capped parts are not really rhyming at all and have all kinds of mismatched amounts of syllables. ARMY RESERVES / ME HURT. Rest of the verse had other broken or very basic (2 syll) rhymes. Your lines also didnt have much impact if I’m honest as you didn’t really make them into punches. A lot of the lines were Just like statements. Louie next time you gotta fill the box and watch out for the self hype lines, not effective in a battle usually. Here it didn’t cost you as I felt what you did drop was still much smoother and effective. Fairs.

Edgeworth tthanks for the advice Good look bro

ACTUALLY QUITE CLOSE ONCE YOU READ IT...... LOUIE WAS MORE BASIC BUT KEPT SHIT SIMPLE AN THATS ACTUALLY WHATS GIVEN HIM THA WIN HERE, WOLF TRIED TOO HARD IN HIS SET-UPS WHICH TO ME LED TO AWKWARD WORDIN AN READIN, YOUR STYLE IS OK JUS TRY NOT TO OVER WORD YOUR MATERIAL, ALSO WATCH YOUR SYLLABLE COUNT WHEN MULTI RHYMIN AS HAVIN BROKEN SETS TAKES ALOT OF POINTS...... BOTH EMCEES CAN LEARN FROM THEIR OPPONANTS VERSE HERE.... FAIR IS DROPPED!