this was a all right text battle some medium rhymes imma finna drop a vote on oneshotpaddy

One was new. Nice seeing so many noobies coming in. That said i think my loser here needs to work on s few things. Capipng rhymes, conceptual ideas, & execution od said ideas. Winner sniped the shit outta this dude. Howeber some concepts felt rushed and suffered bcuz of that trason. Fairs in fellas

One took this pretty easily 

Both could use some more  Effort the loser Lacked punches and structure

Kind of disappointed as this isn’t normal paddy level greatness. But I can see why. Penys  had almost a joke rap where he makes fun of himself. He doesn’t have a single period which makes the entire rap sound choppy from start to stop. The rhymes were very mix match and didn’t make much sense. He doesn’t have any multis either. Neither had many punchlines to speak of (Paddy had a few but Penny had none) and the ones that existed hit like a pillow. Paddy had innumerable spelling mistakes (Uzy=Uzi,Mane=Man,Penys=Pennies) which irritated me, even though some might have been intentional.

I love oneshotpaddy's.