Good battle everyone. abedawg had some nice concepts but really needs to study other emcees on the site (I would suggest Rieper, Rai, Lil Kilo) to see how they do punches and multis. I also couldn't tell a lot of the time what (if anything) was meant to be rhyming in your lines, try CAPITALISING rhyming words and having multi-syllable rhymes particularly at the end of each line.

scrimsbruh it was great to see you employing long multis throughout, although some of them seemed a bit forced (your first two rhymes only had assonance, try to have cleaner rhymes like the ones towards the end of your verse). I know you were doing this as practice to wok on your multis but you probably got a bit carried away with them and they detracted from your ability to throw punches, try to maintain consistency between substance and style.

Thanks man

i agree. need to work on my punches. thanks

Abedawg recycled....

abe i already gave you an explanation on this verse on your battle with Giitomatique.. I gotta give this to scrims for better ideas.. and punches. the multies were extremely underwhelming (Letsbeef.com, Well Deep On Shop) idk i feel like it coulda been better done... fair vote guys!