Better effort from scrim by a wide margin here. Just feel like he got out punched here. Multi usage was kinda basic as well. Keep that in mind as well for future battles. Squammy got this with harder punches and I was more impressed with his rhyming, as well. Punches were sorta simple in places (mouth/fresh/listerine is super basic) but overall was more consistent and got the W.

SQUAMMY 

Expo: Most of this doesn’t rely on deep references, “Robin Hood’s” nickname is the “Prince of Thieves” etc. 

Only bar that might need explained is Rhine Channel... So he said “Rhine Channel” when it’s actually called the “Rhine Canal”, so he added an “E” and “H” to the word. People with drug problems also add “E” (ecstasy) and “H” (heroin) to their lives so I made that comparison. 

I appreciate all feedback. 

Nah bro. Well played. I'm of the opinion that channel is usable in place of canal. But that's just me. I'm a big fan, Squam! Keep it up cuzz. I look forward to future battles bruh.

One had more punches in his verse that flowed more fluent and the other had a decent attempt but came up short, by a bit more, then a cunt hair, fairs in.