Feel like JoA was simply better here at crafting punches although the wording of the bars was kinda awkward from time to time. Also filled the box, which is a big advantage. scrims I already told ya what you need to do in terms of line count for your battles. I feel you were a bit better here with punchlines, but your bars kinda didn't make sense in parts to me (it's quite como estas when I'm all homo erotica? What? Nah, man).

Glito is a faker who says people plagiarise without defending it. look at my battle with him.

still will not even defend his claims of plagiarism. pls ban.

No, we don't. YOU do that shit. just like INDIA overpopulates. dont bring us down with your shit.

note that he voted on this battle. very big note, first vote. bias much?

Apparently rap battles is glitos way of relaxing. He dont want the normal rules of life in here, nah. Fuck that, he says. Fucking bitch, grow up already, life's hard, stop looking for asylum, man up already.

But glito mate. Why do you cunts overpopulate like you do? Why not slow down? You know Australia is full of Indians? Why? Cause India is fuckin full. What about our aboriginies? That's not your problem either?

Now who's the racist?

Glito blocked me so the only way to talk is talk in here. Can't even comment on the battle. Good verse though cuzz. 

Loser didn't have enough content, fill the box. And he could've been more direct with his attacks. Multis weren't as smooth as what I just read from your other battle. Good ideas but the execution needs to better [more creative setups, natural wording, making sure everything is relevant.]

Joan took this with more content. Opener wasn't executed really well, multis were slanted and that made it choppy. Then you picked up the pace, imo getting better after each bar. Closer was the best from your verse imo. Felt you had the more consistant verse, though the execution could've been better on that first bar.

Joan had more punchlines, better multis and filled the box out better. Normally I’d go a bit more in depth on my vote but this is such a clear victory there’s really no point. 

Como estas to homo erotica. = I'm not afraid to fuck ya.I agree though, was a weak showing.From the very start, I struggled in this one.