Polly got this with the better connections between his punches from start to finish and gets some props for scheming the whole verse, although it felt like a lot of them were reaches, they still somewhat connected, which is more than what I can say for Chekkit, who I felt had a lot of punches that were just completely nonsensical (how can you speak Cancer? What does a mumbler falling have to do with spinach being poisoned? Like what even is that, bro? What do you mean by "being Michi-gan"? A lot of your verse just doesn't make sense, man). You also had the broken multi in the middle of your verse that hurt you, as well. 

if you dont get anything please ask ! good battle man

Good luck

Expo: cuz you'd still be 'labeled with unknown artist' even if you were "RAPPING WITH A KNOWN VET" - UNKNOWN ARTIST is a vet to this site..

Apollyon man I really appreciate you sticking with the same rhyme scheme the whole time that shit was nice. You kept those rhymes clean too I didn't feel like you were forcing it. 

Chekkit you've got a nice flow and your rhymes were pretty clean but a couple of those bars were a bit weak like "thieving fishermen" which is just sorta lazy.

Close to call but its going Apollyon.

rieper! i guess i could word it better but "Rugged" as in like.. rough around the edges ig. lol like a bar in michigan? idk. thanks for the feedback tho!

Neither lit up the box but Phe made a little bit more sense. Lots of stuff that had me scratching my head no matter which way I looked at it from Chekk. This coupled with a bit smoother rhyming from Phe has me leaning his way.