Loser needed to fill up their box. Winner had more and better multies and wordplay, loser's verse was quite basic without any real wordplay in the setup of their punches.

dmsdy didn't really bring much to the table in any aspect. No real punches, no multis, didn't fill the box, lack of structure, etc. Peep some of the better battlers around here (Edgeworth, Shodan, Seul, and Rai) and you'll get a good idea of what good verses look like. Bnas this was terrible, but you still won due to simply attempting to have a verse with rhymes and punches in it, although all of it was pretty bad. It read like a foreigner attempting to rap in English most of the time.

Ayo members, thanks for the comment. I'll work on it

Loser was a beginner and was good but winner was experienced and had a better flow.

bnas had more content though neither really stood out with hard punches ! bnas had the more complex and enjoyable verse tho ! fair vote !

Dmsdy you gotta fill that text box dude or you just get beat by sheer quantity!!

BNAS you brought hotter shit more bars and better flow. 

Not a god tier clash but a clear winner

A clear winner. Bnas, nice bars. You never took me out of any of your lines with your flow. You punchlines landed for me and you came with multies. Takes real skill and you can tell you have your own style. Dmsdy, nice battle. I read through yours several times and all I can say is keep thinking of more stuff. You had a lot less content than Bnas. I do this for fun too, but remember this is a battle and if you wanna win, you gotta be hungry and take every opportunity you have to attack. So you gotta fill in the lines, unless you really have a bar that's a knockout.(don't bet a battle on one bar though) Otherwise it's like standing in a boxing ring and letting your opponent just hit you. But you're in the right direction. "tryin to steal/keep it real" I like. You used the "e" phonetics to flow that line real nice. Now if you could think more of terms of "at" the person. You could probably find more do with your bars, like saying they weren't valuable enough to steal, or too gargbage to steal. And then compare it does something similar, like "stealing his bars would be like picking up a "penny". Not worth the time, I already got my bars in "plenty." And they're "made of gold," so fuck no I don't think his bars are "Valuable." 

So that way, you insult his bars, you have concept. Like mine was money, saying his bars are penny. Mine are gold. And you can put quotations and capitalize bars to add more emphasis and make your rhymes clearer. Hope that help. 

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A clear winner. Bnas, nice bars. You never took me out of any of your lines with your flow. You punchlines landed for me and you came with multies. Takes real skill and you can tell you have your own style. Dmsdy, nice battle. I read through yours several times and all I can say is keep thinking of more stuff. You had a lot less content than Bnas. I do this for fun too, but remember this is a battle and if you wanna win, you gotta be hungry and take every opportunity you have to attack. So you gotta fill in the lines, unless you really have a bar that's a knockout.(don't bet a battle on one bar though) Otherwise it's like standing in a boxing ring and letting your opponent just hit you. But you're in the right direction. "tryin to steal/keep it real" I like. You used the "e" phonetics to flow that line real nice. Now if you could think more of terms of "at" the person. You could probably find more do with your bars, like saying they weren't valuable enough to steal, or too gargbage to steal. And then compare it does something similar, like "stealing his bars would be like picking up a "penny". Not worth the time, I already got my bars in "plenty." And they're "made of gold," so fuck no I don't think his bars are "Valuable." 

So that way, you insult his bars, you have concept. Like mine was money, saying his bars are penny. Mine are gold. And it's "at" him. You can still use stealing as a concept, it just has to be presented in battle format, ya know? It has to feel like a diss. 

And you can put quotations and capitalize bars to add more emphasis and make your rhymes clearer. Hope that helps.

Fairs in. GB