Thanks! Do you have any feedback or advice for what I should improve on?

TYR I feel you took dude too light here and expected him to be a noob or something. Can't be doing things like that, because it cost you the W here. Rhyming was way too simple (1 syllable rhymes ain't gonna cut it) and your punches were almost non-existent, man. You can do better than this. Lil Talent you were pretty good here for a first battle, bro. Feel like you have a pretty good grasp of rhyming and overall know how to punch (closer showed that you at least know the basics of it), and overall I just enjoyed your read a bit more and felt you got the W here.

Not bad for being new bro, nice work

Respect

You Saii, thx for the honest feedback, I underestimated my opponent, thought since he new he'd not come so ready, but that's no excuse, my opponent did a nice job covering the basic of battling, 

Thought one had a better punch structure and wording. Neither really had any standout punches. Going with the one that was smoother. Fairs in.

BRB...creating killers!!!!

Both came hard but i had 2 show luv

Dope battle here but I have my winner off the first read fairs in

TYR was more simplistic and predictable..multies and punches won my vote 

Think TYR went hella light with the 1 syll rhymes and not really converting any of his set ups into real punchlines. Lil Talent was more put together and developed here. I think a proper rematch may be in order.

Upon clicking this I didn't think the battle would turn out this way.

TYR, I have seen so much better from you in the past. This is really weak man. Do better next time. 

I have to give this to Lil Talent because, well, he was talented enough to structer his verse in a way that had more hard hitting jabs. He also had some OK multi's as well.