Senesis you gotta up the complexity in your rhymes and punches from here on, I'd also recommend you cap your rhymes to make sure they stand out from the rest of your verse. Read up on some of Edgeworth, Shodan, Seul, and Rai battles to get better idea on that.

guts you got this but some of your shit was bad, bro. How do you "hawk" someone? Like you can't switch nouns in to verbs like that to make them sound like a wordplay that isn't even loosely related to your end punch. That's a big no-no. Vin Diesel impression punch was alright but overall I felt pretty underwhelmed by your verse. You still won here, though.

This battle is weak overall. I have Sen winning for the following reason. He was extremely generic and basic in his concepts and rhyming, but they atleast made sense. Guts had things like my saber vaped on this man (??), toe knee hawked (?????) and chin weasle (?????????!!!!!!!). Toe knee hawked makes no sense. What’s his toe knee? How do you hawk something? I know the chin weasle line wasn’t a typo since you’re rhyming it with vin diesel. What the FUCK does it mean to chin weasle to check him? Then, the rest of your verse are bars directed at bape. You go off about his xxx avy and mention him by name. So those bars carry 0 weight for this battle as you aren’t battling bape. Sure, sen was generic and his bars could have been used for anyone, but in the sense of this battle he was still targeting “you”, whereas you spent half the verse targeting Bape. So with the top half of guts’ verse making almost no sense, and the bottom half directed at bape, I have to give this to Sen.

Venom of the RedLotus

guts wins this, senesis use the full opportunity of the box never cut short

Well Senesis was just basically talking trash, need sum punches, n multies n concepts, Guts edged this with better structure n concepts 

Looser need to work on setting up his punches 

Got one taking this with better use of rhyming and being slightly more creative, conceptually speaking. Loser lost due to the box not being filled and not having any punch worthy material. Winner obviously had the upperhand throughout. Although that close was weak. Fairs in

clear win here.. Sen you gotta start filling the box or you gon always be at a disadvantage... honest vote 

Agree with Edgeworth's breakdown here, guts seemingly had the better verse but looks can be deceiving, you were all over the place man and it just didn't make sense. Seneis barely edged this with making a bit more sense. Fair's in fellas.

Venom of the Red Lotus