Feel like Caked got this pretty easily and this was, unironically, the best he's written in a while, still a little light on punches, but this did enough. LadyA you weren't too bad here but your rhymes weren't really enough here to get the W. Structure was a bit odd in places as well.

winner had better delivery, both could be retouched though.

My winner had better structure and punches

Caked was light on punches but cleaner than usual and way cleaner and structured than Lady A. Not really a contest here.

LadyA had no structure here. The rhymes were basic and I felt you was rambling. Try setting up your punches in a way that 1/2 lines lead into the final punch. CakedOut gets this clearly, though his punches weren't really creative and some multis was forced making shit choppy.

One was more consistant as far as punch count goes but has terrible wording. Other is a noob and could use some work. Like getting more out of the box ideas, metas and connections. Also by capping the rhymes it makes for an easier read. 

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I thought CakedOut was much stronger in his rhyming ability, basically that's all I could judge this off as there wasn't many other aspects incorporated into the writing of both verses.

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Obvious win here IMO. first line won the battle over good shit.. Lady keep elevating, you seem new to this i think cakedout is just more experienced and it shows... good luck to both