Felt Sho got this with stronger punches from start to finish, although there were a few reaches I noticed in his verse (opener was kind of a reach because you don't hear the cans, you hear the words coming through the cans. Nitpicky, I know, but still). Paris punch was your best one and BOTB. CJ you had some decent lines in your verse (classic denim, for instance), but I feel like you reached a bit more with some of your lines than Sho did (closer honestly didn't make sense to me with how it was worded), and in the end it cost you a golden opportunity with this being one of the weaker verses I've seen from Sho.

Expo: Probably the most important World's Fair in history was held in Paris (it's where they debuted the Eiffel Tower). In Spongebob, the Flying Dutchman is a ghost that's the captain of a ship, but it's all for comedy.

Venom of the Red Lotus

Honestly the loser didnt do so bad I enjoyed his drop but next time he needs to connect the punchlines in a more complex way if he wants to face guys like this, if only he went about 50% harder than he did he could of took this, Winner held it down with stronger content, though I wasnt feeling the last bar it felt out of place, fortunatly for him it didnt cost him the win, fairs in

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Clear as day here. Shodan with fantastic set ups and punches that were very clever. Overkill here for the opppnent. Joe a lot of your lines just read extremely awkwardly with the Multis sounding backwards or something. I just wasn’t really feeling shit like tabs diner send, due amount. Doesn’t really make a lot of sense and I think hinders the smoothness and readbility of your verse. You had decent ideas and I liked the closer a lot but it’s the execution and presentation letting you down. 

I liked the opening lines from chainsaw joe, everything else was good but not as strong as the beginning. Shodan had his good parts too, but had a bit more to take the win.

Venom of the Red Lotus

Shodans rhymes are good

Shodan had the all Around winning verse here.., punches were more crisp n impactful, Joe verse wasn’t bad you got mad potential, good concepts just need to work on bringing the best delivery out of em.

Loser lost this with too many wording issues, concepts were decent but they just weren't executed correctly. Winner had a more clean, concise, complex verse overall. Fair's in gents.

Winner had better structure...joe was kinda hit or miss