Snipework from a KILLER.

Edge took this one with the more creative lines and stronger punchlines. 2nd half of the verse was my fav. Didn't get the opener, multi threw me off. Execution in this verse was nice, especially how you carried some concepts into the next bar and played off of them. Loser's punches kept falling flat due to his execution. The setups could have linked more with the concept, also felt that the ideas he used weren't too creative. Wording wasn't bad, but there were loads of points in the verse where phrases were repeated. Overall an inconsitent verse against a more complex one.

Good read from the winner. Loser could use a little work, not a lot. Fair vote. Snake ass

Edgeworth was coming waaay harder than he needed to here. Other dude wasn't capping rhymes and didn't have any particularly clever punchlines. Could do to study Edge's battles. Fair's in.

One was swinging alot harder here. I appreciated some of the rhyming in Eddie's verse, some of it was smooth. He just need to focus on setting his lines up into punchlines that pack a bit of sting behind em. Edge was being more creative here & that led to his bars having more of a wow factor. That being said, I thought Edge coulda fixed up the wording in the closer. The "setup" multi per say sounded/looked hella forced.

Fairs in yall, good battle!

GLOATS!

Opener from one here was funny. Loser wasn't bad for his first battle to be honest

Winner held down a solid drop here, landing more efficient punches throughout, loser has some fair work but needs to polish up his box work and learn how to properly construct his verse, fairs in