Eddy got this with the better punches and rhyming from top to bottom. Proactive line was BOTB. Nik you weren't too bad here but the rhyming and the punches were just a bit too simple, imo. Just gotta up the complexity of those and you'll be fine.

No hate at all trying to promote healthy voting back on this site Eddy good job on the scheming the entire verse flow is good punches OK I feel with writing ability like that you could get more complex with them but otherwise nice drop fairs in

Winner had better punches, and attempted being more creative. His wording in spots was afwul, make sure it's clean and natural all they way through so that your lines make sense off of the first read. Your ideas were quite good tho, try executing them better in your setups. Loser had better wording but his punches lacked any impact. Try working back from the punch, that way you have some sting already and then strengthen the line by setting it up with shit that's relevant. That was your main problem. Also try not to use the basic rhymes, be more complex with multi rhymes so yuo have more to work with.

they were both kind of basic. maybe a little both creativity on both sides.

NikLee I fucked with the Frozone punch haha, but all in all you gotta be a bit more direct at attacking your opponent. Felt a little cypher-ish. Eddy was swinging harder, had some WP that didn't work but the tube to your back punch was pretty good. I fucked with it. Fairs in yall. Got Eddy edging this one.