Gii won this with more quality and quantity of content in the box here although the rhyming was iffy at best with punches that had potential but didn't land properly. Fictapelli you need to fill the box up from here on. Don't press Enter after every line, LB counts the lines for you so you don't have to do that, and you need to up the complexity of your punch concepts and your rhyming. I'd recommend reading verses from Edgeworth, Shodan, and Seul to get a better understanding.

One was kind of basic and lacked punches.

Loser didn't fill the box so he had less content. Also what he did have wasn't really anything impactful. Winner took this one for having more content and his complexity, even tho his wording needs improving and those multis were stretched. Ideas were dope, the way you executed 'em wasn't. Gotta make sure nothin is choppy and that it all makes sense. Clear snipe :)

Gii went harder and filled more of the box. had better bars and better punchlines.

Fictapelli needs to fill up the box. Got Gii taking this with more material, and better attempts at creating punch-lines. Fairs in yall.