Any votes on here at all I would love to read people's opinions on this battle 

Steven Graham: I see you took the horrorcore approach on this one but it was too basic. You've only got end rhymes (Mum/Bomb, Head/Dead, etc.) I know it's a rap battle but underage reference makes you out to be a pedaphile, not exactly the best look. You should focus on first working with multiple rhymes then expand to incorporating punchlines into your verse that are directed at your opponent.

VerseNebula: Multiple rhymes were good but there wasn't any clear punches in here. You've got to work on crafting punchlines with set-ups to be more complex in your approach. It was enough to take the win on this though.

Overall this was a decent battle was one was a step above. Fair's in gents.

felt like V punched harder, SG needs to cap his rhmes. fair vote.

4-7 opinionated second verse VerseNebula had some punches in his rap linez comboed his opponent and got the w.gb