Orochi got this with the harder punches but his rhyming and overall wording of his verse was pretty bad. He also didn't fill the box up, so points get deducted for that. Steven you gotta fill the box up, bro. Get more complex in your ideas on punches and rhyming, as well.

My choice was more creative but orochi you gotta work on your structure,wording and build-ups.. Conceptually you were good but if you worked on the other aspects of battle rap that i said, you could be a lot better..

Both would do well to check out some verses by site veterans like Edgeworth or Rieper. Not filling the box and not capitalizing rhymes will get people looking at you sideways at best. Steven was basically just being aggressive without using punchlines, whereas Orochi was referencing super obscure stuff. Yall gotta accustom yourself to this site. Anyway, though, although Orochi's verse was longer a bit more "intelligent," I'm voting for Steven Graham because he had the cleaner read. Fair's in.

Neither filled the entire space, but Orochi used quite a bit more space and I found his verse to just try and attempt more punches. Albeit his structure, wording, and rhyming was pretty rough. Felt Graham could have taken this with only just a little bit more content but both gotta try and get more complex with it and fill the entire box.

my winner showed excogitate and less gasconading invited some idiosyncratic and magnanimous belonging to one's peculiar loser who had an individual character but not enough luminescent which the winner clear had as he jizzed all over this battle FAIRZ IZ JIZZINN !

Another tough one but one had more content here. Felt Orochi had more direct hits and attempted to be more creative. Both have potential from what I've seen. Just need to get the basics down then try to be more creative to get more sting from your punches.