Both need to fill the box from here on and bring some rhyming that is more complex than 1-2 syllables at a time. Gave Lil Talent the edge here simply due to him having more attempts at punches, although none of them were that strong. I think you both kinda understand how to craft a bar, just make sure you master the basics of what's needed for a battle verse.

Both was pretty basic...spend more time setting up your punchlines so they have a bigger impact at the end of the line...also multies and schemes would season your verses..winner had better punches aimed at his opp fairs in 

So both of these bars were just absolutely terrible, both of you guys need to read around the site and see how we do things around here, fill up your boxes, learn how to set up punches. Takes some time but you guys will get there. Low 2s for both of you. Fair is in.

Honestly, IMO a higher vocab and just an overall more put together verse got this. Both lacked in every area but one more so than the other. Realistic ratings.

Leaning one sided because they were more creative and had better use of vocabulary, loser had more of a typical insult verse but nothing ground breaking.