Saiii your verse was quite good and hard hitting but some of your multies didn’t quite match up which took away from the overall impact of the verse. Some bars had some really nice wordplay and punches (I particularly liked the tribute to fallen soldiers line) but this wasn’t consistently maintained across the verse.

Mizz Ammo your multies didn’t really match up a lot of the time. For instance, the first two multies have a different number of syllables in them, so how can they match up? You had some nice attempts at punches but ultimately your execution really held you back and stopped you from delivering to your full potential.

Overall I felt Saiii had ideas and execution on another level to Mizz Ammo, so I gave them the win. Gb everyone

Saiii approached this battle with some really impressive multis that I thought were really cool. Although my one problem is that his Cannabis punchline included an uneven amount of syllables that I counted (9 & 8) and I'm not sure if that's an accent thing or not but for me this kind of broke it even though it's still lit as fuck.

Mizz Ammo I feel like has this battle because even though her multis were much more simple, I enjoyed her witty punchlines towards her opponent and the way she structured her verse I felt made it more hard-hitting at the end. Choosing the winner was a really hard choice for me you guys and I really had to think about it here for a mean minute so no hate yo.

Fv but this could seriously go either way tho

My winner was rhyming better and also edged it on flow and punchs.. I think the loser still did her thing here holding they own.. . good battle both fv

Sai nearly sweeps the board on this one. Wordplay wasn’t a factor, as neither had it. Vocabulary was even, with a slightly below average showing on both ends, metaphors also follow suit. Punchlines overall came harder from sai, but were weak on both ends as well. Lines like “jammed in the gun” was what won the punchlines catergory, as mizz ammo didn’t really have any lines that came close to that. Sai also had better multi’s, although the majority either had broken rhymin or syllables. Mizz Ammo had broken syllables or broken rhyming for every line, so got a low score in multi’s. Fair vote is in.

Saiii takes it with a win in punchlines and multi’s. Mizz Ammo loses because of lack of punchlines, and constant broken multi’s. 

Fair vote, if you have questions, dm me.

Ammos verse gave me a headache. 

as im voting im thiniking to myself its not easy voting in this bitch i got nothing but love but still fuck it up sometimes

As much as i hate seeing an emoji mid round Mizzzzz ammo still brought the better bars, sai had a nice scheme tho

I have to give this to sail thought his verse more smoother with the better punches

one was leagues ahead in terms of wording, structure, and creativity of multis. Plus none of his were broken like his opponents. Loser could take notes here. Fairs in

Saiii this was dope. I liked the opener [though with a better setup it'd be way better] and the 'fallen soldier' line. Your execution was good and the way you set up your punches and stuck to the concept was really good. A few problems tho, some multis were broken [last bar] and a few were stretched. Made you lose sting on some punches but I think you did well enough to take this one, clearly being better in every category.

Ammo, your multis was either broken or stretched. They didn't make sense, your overall wording here was choppy af and made everthing unnatural. Unlike Saiii, your setups didn't relate to your concepts and this made your punches have less impact. Also, most of the setups weren't really directed towards Saii at all. Writing about how this 'ain't my first rodeo' ain't gonna work out if you don't expand and flip your concepts into your setups to get more impactful punches. I felt you were quite inconsistent and your punches didn't land with as much sting as Saii's did.