This battle wasn't good, imo. Nickle I struggled to find exactly where you were trying go with your lines, more often than not, as it felt like there wasn't any real structure to them and they lacked a definitive punchline. You were also capping parts of your rhymes that didn't actually rhyme, which is never a good thing to do, as it make it seem like you're actually understanding what you're trying to say. guts I feel like this was a rather poor attempt from you. I feel more often than not you try to use unique concepts, but in instances like this they're too unique to the point where they become completely abstract (I had to Google who Philip Glass was, for example, and I can guarantee that is not going to be a bar that most people get off of a first glance because of how obscure in nature it is). I understand you wanting to use fresh concepts and ideas, but you also have to remember that you have to have the audience relate to it, as well, or your idea is going to fall flat. I also noticed a few broken multis in the end of your verse, which was bad to see cause you're better than that.

All in all, I have guts winning here but this was a poor showing from both.

Re-reading Nickle's verse, I'll retract on his statement regarding capping parts that don't rhyme, however the syllables stressed in your rhyming at times is incredibly unnatural to read (first multi set for example: you have to essentially force all the syllables in HER-TIGHT-GIRDLE to sound anything like DESIRABLE, which is an uncomfortable thing to read). 

The rest of my vote stands. 

Expo:

Dug out all the gold: Gold digger

Girdle: a waist strap, that overweight women tend to use to look slimmer.

Rocket: pen15, play on words.

Thiokol: Rocket fuel (pronounced: thigh er cool)

Hot-wife: A wife who has the freedom to sleep with whoever she wants.

Petrol: Gasoline, idk but some Americans might not know, us aussie's call it that.

Bite a cake out: Saying he should bite cakedout, just a play on words.

i think guts has talent has good ideas but too much metaphors but his multis are nice, nickle i would t o hear more multis but it was a bit easier for me understand than guts, it was funny to me n a good way n i do like the "white furball" line dat was nic e, fv 

I feel obligated to go with Nickle just because he didn't have broken multis left and right, even though guts was ahead conceptually. Fair's in.

It's just the Australian accent m8

Nickle,  that was horrible

 Tbh. I was Expecting more.  Guts,  this wasn't your Typical Luster but u had a more structured verse.  Fairs in

Please refer to this threead for a breakdown of my voting scorecard: https://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1164742#post1164742.

Nickle

3 Points: 

2 Points: 

1 Points: Robust 

0 Points: White Furball (what does this even mean?)

-1 Points: Fireball (the rhyming in this setup was bad)

-2 Points:

Total: 0 Points

guts.

3 Points:

2 Points:

1 Points: Kaleidoscope (rhyming was a bit iffy to hold this one back from a 2 pointer)

0 Points: Biggy line (long winded set up that had HELLA broken rhyming and a lot of repeated words)

-1 Points: Phillip Glass (WP doesn't work both ways)

-2 Points:

+1 for Flow.

Total: 1 Point

MVGT: guts.

my winner showed excogitate and less gasconading invited some idiosyncratic and magnanimous belonging to one's peculiar loser who had an individual character but not enough luminescent which the winner clear had as he jizzed all over this battle FAIRZ IZ JIZZINN !

it was a nice overall battle