gl bro

Concepts:

Frawsty it was cool to see another snow/icy themed verse. Ideas were quite funny Lmao, most people don't go for comedic/witty approaches but I think you did quite well. But you could work on relevancy, imo you did that really well in ya last bar but I didn't see it in any of your other bars. 

Ammo, you had a mixture of nice ideas and some that you didn't expand on. You gotta remember: Just having a good idea isn't enough. The wording and execution has to be good and everything has to relate to your final punch for the most impact. With that said, you have been improving lately.

Execution:

Frawsty your wording was clean tbh. Peeps might get put off with the emphasis on HER at the beginning. That was really the only problem with your multis. A bit choppy at points, mostly where you had longer setups. E.g. the last bar, quite a bit of space between MOUNTAINTOP and SHOUTING STOP.

Ammo, generally your multis are getting better but there were some slanted ones. Also FEED THEM POPPERS was a weird one. Unlike Frawsty, your wording was unnatural at points and you didn't really set yout punches up with creativity. You were direct and aggressive but weren't complex. I did like the YOU'VE MOLESTED bar, that was executed nicely.

Punches:

Frawsty, the opener wasn't too complex but it was funny. Nipples bar was funny Haha, that shit was dope. Again the next bar was funny, easy to follow what you were tryna do with this one. Closer was a bit choppy and kinda meh but imo you closed off better than ammo did.

Ammo, your opener was ok but there wasn't really any relevancy in how you setup your punch and the multis were basic. I couldn't follow what you were tryna do in the 2nd bar but  I did like your 3rd one. Quite witty and you showed here that you can link shit together. Closer was a good idea but you self hyped and then had a really long setup to your final punch, which took off sting. What would you think hits more here: ROUNDS gone stick to you and blow like semtex grenades .... or .... ROUNDS are timed to perfectly blow while they stick to you, after they been set off like semtex grenades. 

Overall one had a smoother verse that was easier to follow and the other had punches that lacked sting due to poor execution.

One had better execution and punches. Mizz ammo had some broken multis - SOON to be ARRESTED(6 syllables) and HOUSTON TEXAS (4 syllables). Keep at it. You both got good potential.

Loser's verse was really selfhyped, like you barely attacked your opponent and your rhymes often felt forced or sloppy. But you did have better multi's than the winner.

Winner's verse is definitely not the best verse I've read from the winner, but it had overall better structure and properly attacked the opponent.

MVGT: Mizz Ammo

I got Frawsty taking this with just being a bit more creative, I felt like Mizz Ammo was just rhyming words. It may sound cool to hear a whole bunch of multis, but she should be focusing on setting up proper punchlines. Fairs in, yall.

Close one.. Votes in

.....? Oh shit phosevpho