Felt Sal took this pretty easily. Just a lot cleaner in regards to his lines and set up his punches in a much better fashion, causing them to hit harder. Rhyming was also more impressive, to me, which sealed the deal even more so. Charity case line was his best. Vuitton you had a few reaches in your verse that I was just not diggin, man (the whole opener with the Ford in front of V was a reach, imo). Also, what is a graspable odor? Like no one says stuff like that, my dude. You gotta dead that for future battles. 

Expo: high tolerance means a couple hits of a any drugs wont be felt.

In lieu Vuitton get a gole punched through em he aint FIT FOR THE BELT - in lieu means *instead or to be replaced with* so puttin a hole in a Louis Vuitton belt means adding an extra notch coz it doesnt fit.

Razor, buck fifty.. no CHARITY CASE - self explanatory but meaning Raise $1.50 for this bum

The rest speaks for itself.

Good battle Vuitton

Good drop blood

Sal got it clearly. V was non sensical for the most part and really just bad in other spots. Sal was smoother wth his rhyming and flow, and his verse made a lot more sense.

Gb

Concepts:

Vuitton, you had some ideas and stuck to them well, better than Salford did. But your punch count was less. Some of your setups were way too long for an 8. 

Salford, your ideas were nice but the 1st one wasn't too creative. I think you had more punches in this verse and executed your bars really well.

Execution:

Vuitton, personally I think your setups in the 1st two bars were too long, could've reduced that filler in the second bar to save space and reach the punch more quickly. Last bar's wording was good tho, you executed that shit nicely.

Salford, HITS ARE UNFELT didn't really match up with the other multis in the bar. SHIP (IT'LL SINK IN) - Don't know why anyone would do that bracket shit lol, but it fucked up the flow and you lost some sting cos of that. Apart from that, your wording was quite good across your whole verse.

Punches:

Vuitton, opener was nice but imo you stretched out the last setup so it took too long to get there. Punch was mad dope tho. Inner multis in the 2nd bar were smooth but I didn't see what they had to do with Sal's pizza. Punch, again was creative and quite funny, but landed with less sting. Closer was dope, wording was really good. Better structured bar for an 8 liner.

Salford, imo your verse got progressively better. Opener didn't hit that hard but it was a nice flip. Second bar was quite clever but that 1st multi was a stretch. There was ARE-UN matched with OUGH-TA and FOR-THE. Charity case was dope, my fav in the battle. Nice wp there. Lost sting in your closer cos of that shit with the brackets but the punch was creative.

Overall, one had more punches and better execution here. The other had better execution and stuck to his concepts better but his setups could've been shortened/reworded to get more punches in.

After a few reads I have my winner, based off of better setups and much cleaner punchlines.

I think my loser had stronger multies, but the punches kinda felt all over the place and it really hindered the reading. A lot of the punches were played and switching your multi setup mid punch on the first line really made your hit lose the sting imo. Fairs in fellas gl.

Vuitton i see potential for sure. nice multies and overall u got the ides of how to set up a punch. i just wonder tho what's ford before V got to do with branded logos? there's no v on the Ford logo. u had nice internal rhymes as well. i think had u done more as in built on the sals pizza lije more it would've been nicer.  the impractical jokers idea was a cool one for sure but u should've taken a more creative approach.. possibly mentioned more impractical jokers related things before the punch to make the whole concept hit harder.

salford got alotta potential too. also nice rhyming and understanding of how to craft a creative punchline. imo the fit for the belt line was the bar of the battle. very dope. and the closer / critical thinking was clean as well. aside from those 2, nothing hit very hard. the opener was super simple... overrall tho u had more creativity here.. leading to harder hitting punches and that got u the W. fairz in. 

This was closer then I thought. Vuitton gonna be a problem with those multis yo, very nice. Salford being Salford killing shit. Salute to both