Expo:

wordplay in the second bar. Hot keys/hockey. Man nice with a blade/man, ice with a blade. If I stick/if high stick. 

Wordplay in the last bar: misogynistic/massagin his dick

ACs till my J's crease!

Fairs in. Flippin his lid line was nice 

Concepts:

Joan had some nice ideas, but also some less creative ones, e.g. that last one. Wording was really weird in some parts and you had some broken multis. [MIGHT GO FLEX FOR THE HELL OF IT] - 8 syllables against [PSYCHOSEXUAL DEVELOPMENT]- 9 syllables, well that's what I got from it. 

Aggo, your wording was quite good. Ideas weren't complex as some of Joan's but your execution was a lot better. Wp mostly okay except the high stick one. I felt you were more consistent in bringing fresher concepts than Joan was.

Punches:

Joan there was a lot of potential behind your 1st bar but your wording let you down. The idea was creative but you didn't execute that shit right, or it would've landed with sting. But I liked how you stayed relevant across the whole bar. The next bar and the closer were nice but in terms of creativity against your first bar, it was a step down. Especially the closer, I felt you could've used that idea in a different way to bring a more fresh and impactful punch.

Aggo the opener was nice, with the stretched/slinky flip. I'm beginning to think you like them shorter multis haha. The bar was executed well tho. Next bar was nice, with all the wp's. Though, the high stick one didn't really work both ways but apart from that the wording was good. Punch landed with some sting, I liked how you set it up. Next bar, the MUCH/MOUSE rhyme bit, quite stretched. The setup for the punch was dope tho, draw/give him 3 rounds- niiice. Closer was funny but you said 'misogynistic/massagin HIS dick' but I din't really catch who he was jerking off? Lol, but the idea was good.

Overall, I think Aggo had less errors here. And better execution. Also, he was more consistent, bringing more punches that landed with sting. Joan had an ok'ish verse but his wording wasn't as good as Aggo's and his punches could've been reworded to be more impactful. Dope shit mahfuckas.

i think both were ok, but not too great. i didnt get the aCCORDIAN bar n wat rhymed w/ it, the other mc u cood just simply write panuc. but for joan d, da took a cock line was funny, n the jerkoff line for aggo was also funny, but i felt obe slightltly edged it