fuck it snipers at the ready!!!!!!!!474

I think Mizz Ammo got with better multis and proabably better understanding of rhymes, But MadChanter had a cool flow

OK..... AMMO, THA ''UDDERS FLOP'' WAS A LIL LEFT FIELD BUT MADE ME LOL, OPENIN BAR WAS REALLY GOOD ACTUALLY AN REALLY AGGRESSIVE.  THA ''POOR METHODS'' LEADIN INTO LEAVE HIS ''CAREER IN THA RED MAN'' IS THA BEST BAR IVE READ FROM YOU TO DATE, VERY FUCKIN NICE TO SEE YOU SPROUTIN CONCEPTS LIKE THAT AGAIN.  CLOSER WAS A LIL BASIC IN TERMS OF RHYMIN BUT YOU KEPT THAT AGGRESSIVENESS GOIN AN ENDED THA VERSE REALLY REALLY NICE.  PROLLY YOUR BATTLEVERSE OF THA YEAR RIGHT HERE........ MC, YOUVE GOT A NICE FLOW ACTUALLY AN THA OPENER WAS OK, BUT IT WAS A LIL ALL OVER THA PLACE IN TERMS OF STRUCTURE, SHITS NICE FOR AUDIO BUT IN TEXT YOU NEED TO SET-UP YOUR PUNCHLINES FOR BETTER EXECTUTION, ''PUSHIN AHEAD HARDER THAN A JANITORS BROOM'' IS OK BUT IT HAD NO LINK IN WITH THA REST OF YOUR BAR, ''ZOOM ZOOM'' WAS FUNNY BUT NOT REALLY NEEDED LOL.  ''SOAR/SORE WOUNDS - FUNGUS AN SHROOMS'' HAD POTENTIAL.  ''SOON AMI'' DOSENT REALLY WORK AS TSUNAMI IS PRONOUNCED ''SOON ARMY''.... AN THA FINAL WORDPLAY DIDNT WORK GRAMATICALLY BOTH WAYS ''DOSENT TAKE A MATHMATICIAN TO TELL IVE ONE'' DOSENT REALLY READ NATURALLY.... YOUR RHYMIN WAS OK THO NEXT TIME CAP YOUR RHYMES SO YOUR VERSE IS SLIGHTLY EASIER TO FOLLOW AN WATCH THA SYLLABLE COUNT ON YOUR MULTI RHYMES....... ALL IN ALL I GOT AMMO TAKIN THIS WIT MORE AGGRESSION, LESS SELF HYPE AND HAVIN THA BAR OF THA BATTLE WIT THA ''METHOD/REDMAN'' CONCEPT..... ENTERTAININ SHIT FROM BOTH HERE THO, FAIR IS DROPPED!

Thanks everyone, a little note is I'm actually a poet in origin and picked up rapping here because my friends always battle and they say I'm too poetic not rapper-like so I appreciate all the feedback... I'll continue to grow ig

As for the Tsunami line that might just be a difference in dialect because I'm Jamaican

Close. Felt mad went for more swings but struck out a lot whereas ammo kept it more simple but was consistent. Got ammo edging it with the short aggressive style in this one. 

One of the better verses I've seen from Ammo, some nice punchelines here. Loser didn't really have the aggression that Ammo had, and his punches weren't executed in a way that would make 'em land with more sting. Both had instances where wording was fucked up, so both should work on making sure that what they write natural and makes sense.

Felt one had better executions then the opp.

No H8, FV in