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Orochi (14%)
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Reppin: Rojales, Valenciana, Spain
BizzyOne (86%) WINNER
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Reppin: California, United States



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Battle started: December 24th 2018 at 23:54
Challenger joined: July 6th 2019 at 00:39


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2019-07-06 00:39:39).

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Kiwi Peewee
<Assassins>
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I found this a tough call to make. Both verses had some good ideas but were marred by some real issues with their execution.

Orochi, a lot of your multies didn't gel well. For instance, "street n broken/creaked open" are a different number of syllables. I assume that by not capitalising the "n" in the first multi you mean to indicate that the multi is broken up into parts. However, this only really works 1) with longer multies, 3 is really too short + 2) when more than one multi in the set is broken up in a similar fashion, so that the cadence remains the same. Also, a lot of your punches really seemed like a self-diss if anything. For instance, your opener – maybe its just worded so badly that I can't understand it, but I get the impression that it claims that EMDUB will prison-rape you. That's not something you should say in a battle.

EMDUB, you also had issues with multies. For instance, your first scheme "gay shit no lie fam/blatant this guy her man/takes it like a champ", the syllable count per multi goes 5, 6, 5. Overall though, although I thought you also had some issues with wording, I felt that your bars were more coherent, the schemes you were attempted were more effective (if equally imperfect) and your verse in general made more sense, so I gave you the win by the narrowest of margins. Good battle!

Posted on: 2019-07-08 04:19:03 Private Message Kiwi Peewee

 
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Orochi
<HEADSOFF>

Expo: in Greek mythology The Epic Cycle (Greek: Ἐπικὸς Κύκλος, Epikos Kyklos) was a collection of Ancient Greek epic poems, composed in dactylic hexameter and related to the story of the Trojan War, including the Cypria, the Aethiopis, the so-called Little Iliad, the Iliupersis, the Nostoi, and the Telegony. 

2. He had. Track “Damn right” wich Saxx votes on and he gave him 9..

3. Skrillex and Deadmouse are Dub Step Dj’s and He’s username is EMDUB...

Goodluck EM

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Posted on: 2018-12-25 00:47:32 Private Message Orochi

BizzyOne
<LoD>
LBA Champion
Scheme Champion

marvelous character line is about there Punishers Tag. And A blink of an eye line is a cypher that he created.

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Posted on: 2019-07-06 00:47:44 Private Message BizzyOne

Flow Colombo
<P7>
Live Battler

GB

I had a lil trouble following along Orochis verse, the rhyme schemes seemed scattered and I couldnt really define the punches

EM dub had cleaner multis

point gave him a direction like he aint part of the area was fire

FV IN

Voted: Orochi / BizzyOne
Posted on: 2019-07-07 13:40:00 Private Message Flow Colombo

BizzyOne
<LoD>
LBA Champion
Scheme Champion

"MARVELOUS CHARACTERS" i spelled it wrong

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Posted on: 2019-07-07 13:42:58 Private Message BizzyOne

You Are Not Better
<WANTED>

gave this to emdub because I feel like while both battlers seemed to struggle to find solid concepts and rhyme schemes to work with emdubs material was a bit more consistent with their rhymes.

orochi your finishing line to me was just really lacking I mean for one giving somebody a 9 is not how one would refer to pregnancy and it was just such an obscure angle to take, also the setup made no sense whatsoever. also wtf is your open bar even talking about I mean obviously it would hurt to be raped but what u have done is illustrated a scenario where emdub is raping u in prison, how is that an effective angle to take in a battle? lol like "ho ho your bars dont affect me but ur dick sure does!"

emdub that opening bar was just shit I'm sorry I mean the multis were just weak and in reality what you said was you were "busting shots into orochi and she took it like a champ" which in your words sounds like some "gay shit no lie fam" lol but ok. dont really understand the next bar either does the "point" give you, "Em", direction or does it give orochi direction also what is this "point"? I get what ur trying to say but its just not worded very well imo.

Voted: Orochi / BizzyOne
Posted on: 2019-07-08 01:47:15 Private Message You Are Not Better

BizzyOne
<LoD>
LBA Champion
Scheme Champion

well the bar went over your head then fam. The bar can be said 2 ways and has 2 meanings. Shots be bustin in orochi just takes it like a champ(gun bar and on another since, follows up with him being gay). Uh row she, sounds like orochi. Re-read the opener and really think about what i'm saying lol. its wordplay. and a "point" meaning a hollow point. its another gun bar but the concept is about him being lost. like damn bro i gotta teach you how to read? i got higher votes from everyone else cause they understood the verse.  

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Posted on: 2019-07-08 03:37:48 Private Message BizzyOne

 

 
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