I’m tryna make my bars more readable so this is my first explanation comment, let me know if you have any feedback please, I always wanna improve. 

As I usually do the wordplay parts/schemes/associations in my verse are in ‘inverted commas’, and the double entendres aren’t reaching, here they all are just in case any were missed: 

RIB IT/RIBBIT because I’m not feeling froggy to fuck her // MAKES SENSE/MAKES CENTS because I said she’d do anything for cash, and then I extend that monopoly scheme when I say everything about this HOE TELLS/HOTELS us thats she’s used up property. 

gl bro 

AMMO STARTED REALLY WELL ACTUALLY, YOUR FIRST LINE WAS ACTUALLY A REALLY SMOOTH READ AN WAS WORDED WELL.  THERE WAS TOO MUCH SELF-HYPE FROM YOU IN THIS VERSE THO IF IM HONEST, AN YOU HAD SOME BROKEN RHYMES IN THERE TOO ''HOTT-EST-IN-THA-BOX''(5 SYLLABLE) ''IS-CALL-IN-COPS''(4 SYLLABLES), ''PLENTY GARBAGE'' IS AN AWKWARD RHYME GRAMATICALLY TOO..... FABLE YOU STARTED WIT A BROKEN MULTI ALSO WIT THA ''HER-FRIEND-LY''(3 SYLLABLES) ''DE-SERVE-AN-Y''(4 SYLLABLES), THA ''RIB IT'' PART I REALLY LIKED THO, THA HUMAN LOBBY MADE ME LOL.... THA CLOSER WAS BAR OF THA BATTLE THO, DONT KNOW WHY YOU PUT A ''?'' AFTER ''CHOOSE'' THO AS THAT TRIPPED ME UP AS I WAS READIN IT...... ALL IN ALL I GOT FABLE TAKIN THIS WIT CLEANER WORDIN AN BETTER EXECUTION OF PUNCHLINES..... GOOD READ THO....FAIR IS DROPPED!

Ok my winner here had better punchlines. although, the multis werent that great but you know how much effort you need to put in to win a battle so i understand. As for the loser in this battle. Try to use better set ups and connect them to punchlines. FV

Felt like 2nd battler had more creative punches, i don't feel straight violence bars 

Fable's punches were harder imo, body suit that don't suit her body? sheeesh good shit

ammo i liked your aggression, you defo come across the one who wanted this more, keep doing your shit n you'll be poppin 

Concepts:

Both were even in terms of the ideas they brought. Though Fable was a lot cleaner and made more sense than Ammo did. Ammo, your wording was really bad, this made it hard to interpret what the fuck you tried to bring across. You weren't even going too complex but what you wrote didn't come across as natural.

Fable you haven't come as complex as you normally do, but your wording was cleaner I found it easier to follow what you were saying. 

Multis:

Fable edges this for me. Not complex multis but they were smooth. I would say make em a bit longer so you have more to work with. Voters are harsh on the rhyming lmao.

Ammo's multis were ok at the beginning, but as the verse progessed they got stretched and that last one didn't make any sense. You gotta remember that the last multi in each bars forms part of/most of the punchline: "setup" --> PUNCHLINE is what normally goes on around here, and if your multis (speaking from experience lol) don't make sense or done't rhyme then loads of sting is lost.

Punches:

Ammo, in the 1st bar you had the ideas but your execution wasn't the best so you didn't really open your verse with a solid bar. Next bar had good rhyming but there wasn't any real punch there, more like a statement. Then you self-hyped, one of the many low points in this verse, self-hyping doesn't bring nothing in terms of strong punchlines and impact. You gotta be direct to get that shit in. Didn't you fucking read the PM's HVK sent? He didn't write that shit for nothing lool. Your closer didn't make sense, so what if you're not like the other savages that you're talking about? You didn't expand on that point.

Fable, you opened with a bitchslap, but not really a solid punch. The respect was funny tho haha. Next bar was quite good, the 'suit ya body' was a nice set up, and the punch itself had sting to it. Nice work with the suit/bag up part, though I would say try being this relevant in all your bars. 'Human lobby' was okay. Closer was nice, you ecxecuted that shit well.

Overall Fable gets this cos he had the mmore readable verse and better punches. Whereas Ammo had loads of errors in her verse that left her with punches that had potential but landed with little sting.

Thought Ammo was rhyming real good for the most part, but idea wise she was lacking, where as Fable had better ideas, and executed them in a way where I felt like they hit harder. Not a bad battle here, but I gotta lean towards Fable. Fairs in yall and good luck!