Gutty ain't fooling around this month. So salute for that OG, losers verse was hard as hell to read. I have my winner off first read

CG got this hands down as the other dude only filled half the box and was very basic in his approach.

Concepts: 

Gutpunch had more complex ideas, and you kept the setups in your bars relevant. Serge didn't really vome with a battle verse, his ideas were better adapted to a cypher.

Execution:

Both had problems here. But Serge had more, your lines didn't really make sense, like you wanted to paint off your words?! And you weren't directing attacks at your opponent, which impacted your verse a lot. Gutpunch, you had better wording but not in all your bars, like the multi 'WORK WITH TOOLS n TACTILE BLISS' was choppy compared to the others. And there was a sense of some self-hype in ya verse too Lol, it was okay since you took this battle easily but against others you gotta try to be direct all the way through.

Multis:

Gutpunch had multis but some were forced af like the 1st set. But you took this category since Serge didn't really use multis and his verse was hard to follow. Serge, cap your multis and make sure each syllable rhymes. 3 or less is basic so try above 4 syllables so you have more to work with. 

Punches:

Gutpunch I liked the opener, nice nameflip. Wording in the next bar wasn't the best so the punch landed with less sting. I liked the closer too, it was nicely executed. Serge there were not really any punches in ya verse which is something you gotta work on, your verse was too cypherish and lacked impact.

Overall Gutpunch took this battle easily with a verse with some nice punches against Serge's more cypherish verse.

OK...... ALL OF SERGES VERSE WAS SELF-HYPE, ITS COOL TO DO THAT IN CYPHERS BUT IN BATTLES YOU NEED TO FOCUS YOUR ATTENTION ON ATTACKIN YOUR OPPONANT DUDE, YOU ALSO RHYMED ''BOREDOM'' TWICE AT THA START.  NEXT TIME DIRECT YOUR LYRICS AT YOUR OPPONANT DUDE........ CG's ''NIPPLES CLIPPED TO A BATTERY'' AND ''AUTISTIC TWIN'' MADE ME LOL.  DIDNT LIKE THA ''PURGE FROM FOOLS SACS FROM HITS'' RHYME AS THAT WAS SLIGHTLY AWKWARD AN KINDA FORCED, ENJOYED ALOT OF THA OTHER PARTS THO..... CG TAKES THIS IN TERMS OF A CONTEST.... FAIR IS DROPPED!

Loser's verse was really underwhelming, especially with all the effort the winner put in. But, you're a newbie so I'd just tell you to try to work on punches. Just actually attack your enemy. Also, don't rhyme with the same word like tf? Just listen to some old 90's rap to understand the structure of rhymes.

Winner had a fire verse, legit one of the dopest verses I've read from you. Real good shit! Dope.

MVGT: Cpt. Gutpunch

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