Hands'll be with the griddle. Hansel and gretel wordplay. Fictional characters from a kids book. The rest is word play with fables name and pretty much self explanatory.

God damn the concepts from my winner here were extradoniary. The loser had some nice shit but alot of it was hit or miss. Fairs in fellas

Fable gets this one with a bit clearer of an approach in terms of his punchlines. He had 1 small error which was the wp. Every verse from Double Dragon. But, Em had lots of broken rhyming in terms of syllable counts and general flow that really took away the readibility and swung the battle to Fable.

Concepts:

Fable had better ideas that were alot more complex than Emdub's. Your execution was a lot better too, though cos of all the formatting the shit was a bit hard to follow. Emdub the ideas were there but you didn't execute an properly.

Multis:

Both had some weird rhyming. Fable, multis like 'MARIO KART' and 'FROM YOUR RAP SONGS' were slants with other multis in their bars. Emdub, most of your multis didn't rhyme, the syllables didn't match up.

Punches:

Fable, the opener was okay, the 'FUCKING DACHSHUND' one was nice tho. The art line was nice too. Closer was okay but could've hit harder if it was worded cleaner. Em, you had some nice ideas but you're multis and wording let you down. Make sure the syllables match up bro.

Fable gets this with the more cleaner verse and slightly better wording. Em, you gotta make sure your multis rhyme so shit doesn't get too choppy. It made your punches lose a lotta sting.

Okay both had flaws that really bothered me, first of all Fable, Dragon is pronounced Draggin' not Drag On though thats how its spelled. I enjoyed the concept behind it but you didnt do nearly enough with it to make it a solid hit.. The rest was alright but idk.. You had a tight flow but nothing stood out really. Emdub, you had a similar issue where in the reality check line coulda been a crazy good personal but you seemed to be more focused on the rhyming as opposed to the actual content, it was apparent throughout your verse but especially this line... Overall tbh its hard to judge cuz neither brought any amazing punches to the table.. However Im giving this to Fable just slightly for having the more complex rhyme scheme and concepts. But it could go either way, fairs in guys

I just wasn’t feeling emdubs angle in the one, I feel like the word play on dubs name by fable was more creative, can’t wait to see who you both go against next 

''DUB'LL DRAG ON'' IS CLOSE VERY VERY CLOSE LOL, GOOD IDEA THO, ''RUGBY TACKLE'' PART WAS NICE WIT A GOOD SET-UP TOO VERY ORIGINAL ACTUALLY.  LIKED THA CLOSER THO THAT WAS MY FAV PART FROM FABLES VERSE...... DUB CAME WIT SOME PLAYED PARTS BUT USED THEM IN A COOL WAY, LIKE FABLE YOUR CLOSER WAS MY FAV PART FROM YOUR VERSE, I ALSO LIKED THA 'EATIN OFF YA PLATE' AN 'REALITY CHECK' PARTS BUT BOTH ARE NOT FRESH CONCEPTS...... ALL IN ALL IVE GOT TO GIVE THIS ONE TO FABLE AS HIS LINES WERE SLIGHTLY MORE ORIGINAL AN SOME OF DUBS RHYMES WERE OFF SYLLABLE ''READ-ING-WHAT-YOUVE-WRI-TEN''(6 syllable)  ''BE-LIEVE-IN-ALL-YOUR-FIC-TION''(7 syllable) ... YOUR FIRST TWO RHYMES WERE OFF SYLLABLE TOO, THINGS LIKE THAT MAKE THE DECISION SLIGHTLY EASIER..... ENTERTAININ READ FROM BOTH THO, KEEP DOIN YA THING..... FAIR IS DROPPED!

Good Battle Yo, but i disagree with the whole syllable count thing imo...