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Fable (100%) WINNER
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Reppin: London, England, United Kingdom
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Reppin: Delvine, Delvine, Albania



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Battle started: December 22nd 2018 at 16:18
Challenger joined: December 22nd 2018 at 16:44


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2018-12-22 16:44:50).

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PapaLock
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Clear as day tbh. Fable had way more in terms of impactful content and just had a much better grasp of rhyming mechanics and fundamentals compared to forewardplay. forewardplay you lacked in all of these areas I named off for Fable and that cost you the battle in a major way. I would use this battle as a way of improving yourself by taking notes from what your opponent brought to the table.

Posted on: 2018-12-22 18:10:20 Private Message PapaLock

 
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Edgeworth
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Got Fable barely edging it out here with just a little bit extra on his punches. Felt like he had more punches and they were a bit fresher than Word. word has a dope style though and with a bit of refining could have took this. Fable what made this close mainly was a few BIG errors in rhyming, such as ALL OUT WAR / SNORLAX PAWS. Not one syllable rhymes at all in that multi. But, I still felt you did enough here to win by bringing more punches. Closer was nice from both. 

Voted: Fable / forewordplay
Posted on: 2018-12-22 17:04:42 Private Message Edgeworth

Mr McGoo
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I got Fable edging this shit, but Foreword Play done his thing, just needed a lil more punches imo. 

"So I'll cut your mouth, leave a permanent smile like friendly people" <-- Bar of the event right there, the layers in that are dope. Friendly people DO often wear a smile. 

All in all, props to both MCs. 

Voted: Fable / forewordplay
Posted on: 2018-12-22 17:13:04 Private Message Mr McGoo

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Concepts:

Fable came with the better ideas, fresher, more out of the box. Foreword was kinda rambling and ya didn't expand on your ideas, so what he wrote didn't really have that wow factor.

I'd say come up with an idea, and create a punch for it first. When you're happy with what you got, work backwards from that, so even if your execution is poor you'll still have that impact.

Execution:

Fable, you take this one quite clearly. You had a better and more natural verse, with cleaner wording than your opponent. Made it easy to understand and follow what you brought. Foreword, your wording was actually not bad, you was direct and all, but, big BUT, it seemed like you were tryna put in all these big words that literally made it look like you put em in to make shit look more complex. Sorry fam, but try being smoother and natural with your wording, it's a key element. My bad for picking out the bad parts, but it's gotta be done.

Punchlines:

Fable, nice opener. Quite a cool lil link there. Clever line which was followed by a personal with a decent flip. You stuck well with the gun concept and kept shit in your bar relevant. Rhyming in the next bar was stretched and I did think the set up could've been reworded a little to make that punch land with more sting. Some of the shit you said in the 'FALLOUT 4' bar was weird though, made sense but just dind't add any sting to the punch. Closer was nice but could've been setup better.

Foreword, 1st off, you didn't fill the box which limited your space. Also, you didn't bring any decent punches since you didn't execute your ideas properly. Felt kinda rushed and there was no structure to your bars. You gotta work on your multis as well, make sure the syllables rhyme (Multis are the rhymes that are capped, check your opponents verse out) 

Overall, Fable took this easily with a decent verse. Some errors, but enough to take this. Foreword didn't have punches that landed with impact and lacked a verse that was capable of beating his opponent's.

Voted: Fable / forewordplay
Posted on: 2018-12-22 17:15:47 Private Message KG The Prince

Erk
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I think Fable got this pretty clearly.. Though he had alot of flaws in his verse, whether its choppy rhymes disrupting the flow or punches that straight up missed.. Fore barely rhymed all throughout and all his punches were either goofy of judt horribly executed completely.. Fairs in guys

Voted: Fable / forewordplay
Posted on: 2018-12-22 18:05:42 Private Message Erk

king1a
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Looks like forewordplay wrote a prose. I will give it to fable. its obvious he knows what he's doing.

Voted: Fable / forewordplay
Posted on: 2018-12-22 18:39:54 Private Message king1a

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FABLE HAD SOME NICE PARTS HERE, LIKED THA 'FRIENDLY PEOPLE' PART AN I LIKED THA 'FALLOUT 4' PART THAT MADE ME LOL, IN YOUR CLOSER TRY NOT TO FOCUS TOO MUCH ON DISSIN HIS CHICK AS ITS ALWAYS BETTER TO FOCUS MORE ON YOUR OPPONANT ESPECIALLY ON A CLOSER, I LIKED YOUR PERSONAL JAB AT THA START TOO WIT THA ALBANIAN CONNECTION.  YOUVE GOT HELLA POTENTIAL THO, YOU HAVE A LOT OF LIL BITCHSLAP LINES WITHIN YOUR VERSE, JUS NEED TO WORK A LIL BIT ON THA SET-UPS SO THA EXECUTION COMES THROUGH MORE....... WORD HAD SOME NICE PARTS TOO ACTUALLY WHICH WERE QUITE QUIRKY I DID ACTUALLY LIKE YOUR CLOSER, YOU NEED TO PUT SOME GRAMMAR IN YOUR VERSE THO COZ THAT SHIT WAS HARD TO READ AN FOLLOW.... IVE GOT TO EDGE THIS ONE TO FABLE DUE TO THA READABILITY AN THA CONSISTANT LIL JABS, HE WROTE AN EXTRA LINE TOO LOL..... GOOD BATTLE THO AN A ENTERTAININ READ..... FAIR IS DROPPED!

Voted: Fable / forewordplay
Posted on: 2018-12-22 18:46:04 Private Message HVK

 

 
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