#Killed

dang i just read my own verse here n i relize its kinda weird n confusin .i hve malfunctioning internet this season so its hard to go back n edit. but yo dat "tetris highscore bar" dat got me. gl ruin.

expo- i attempted to refer to da rodent cage like a pet hampsters home or science, where it exercise in that rolling wheel thing, . the burning wheel to' run round in circles' it was supposed to be bout lighting da wheel on fire n tryin to run away from it. da clown n coin bars, ya i was tryin to connect da 2. 

player 2 was nice af with it. i thot player 1 could have won after reading the verse but second player came out like a storm and took it. tighter flow, more smarter lines. both did good thoa

RoadBlockBoy shows real promise with this verse, the set-ups / concepts were there but the execution wasn't the greatest. Last bar was your best one. You've got the multi's down so just focus on having clear-er wording for the punches but you're definitely on the right track, a lot better then my first 50 battles. Ruin had some played concepts (tetris/mortal kombat) but the delivery / punches were enough to take this. Fair's in fellas.

block got potential but was kinda all over the place. ruin brought a smoother read with more well thought out ideas. fairz in. 

gb