MvH

Loser's verse felt choppy and hard to read at times. I would advise you to absorb some infomation about the winner's verse and use it to improve your own. You seem like you have potential, but potential left to hide is potential kept to die.

Winner's verse was pretty good overall, it wasn't the best I've read from the winner but it did what it needed to do to win.

MVGT: Bnas

Player 2 got this one with hard rhymes.  he had the aggression more than player 1. player 1 wasn’t raw enuff plus felt his lines were 2 simple.

Capping your punches is more style but not truly needed. McMaster had some good ideas but the whole verse was just end rhymes minus the last wordplay bar, I think if you work on introducing multiple rhymes throughout the verse and adding more metaphorical punches you could really up your game but you've got the rhyming down. Bnas was slightly more creative / had multiple rhymes which really gave him the upperhand, he also had played concept which hurt him but it was enough to take the W imo. Fair's in folks. Props on both filling the boxes on a 16.