Felt that this was kinda clear for captain here. DT you really reached a lot with some of the wordplay you were using (He only got green holding a raddish/Raditz is one instance of that) and because of that your punches lost a whole lot of steam compared to what they might've had if you executed them properly. captain your verse was alright. I feel like you're slowly getting better over time in making sure the concepts you use relate to the concept in a way that you can flip the idea creatively to make a good punch. Hospice condition line was meh from the jump, but the closer was actually pretty good. Use that line as a template for what to look for and you'll do well.

Goku raddish are brothers . Saying /sayian

Freezer /frieza

LoD.

Damn b this shit was hot yo. One dude had more punches while the other had clearer multis. Fairs in famos

Close one but dopeflo had a few misses that have me edging to gut. It’s Raditz not Raddish and freezer freiza is played af. Dope flo had good flow but gut was fresher and connected cleaner.