Fairs in, Dat, liked the Bastard an orphan line. Seriously had to re read it and it still makes me smile. But the concert scheme personally also just my thoughts as well, why did we put . . . before your verse? I'm not to sure about it. Hypnotize, man, to be honest I just wasn't feeling it, first you're giving us less words, while Dat had to save space with things like w/ and @. I even put this shit in a word counter, you had at least 30 more words you could fit in there. But as always just my thoughts

hyp was basic n below basic i thonk WWD had far harder punches n much more creative bars, a true talent...fv no h8

Pretty easy one here, Hypnotize, you got some potential. I think with the right guidance you can really start doing some damage. You need to fill the box at least, and give us some more material to judge. I felt like MaCc was just hitting harder here, and executed his ideas a bit better whilst showcasing some better rhyming ability. Fairs in.