Got Sho taking this and here's why: Sho had the more consistent verse from top to bottom although he had a weird instance of self-hype in his lines which is very much unlike him. Better use of multis, punches, and had more creative concepts. Best line was his opener here. Pretty clever and a concept I hadn't seen before. captain I honestly thought you had the best line of the battle with the bro the l/brothel punch and I laughed when I read it cause it was pretty good lol but overall I felt your bar quality was very up and down here compared to Sho's and that really cost you here. Multis were stretched in some spots (mid-portion of your verse) and to top it off you used a word that isn't even a word (pubertal). You've got potential and your opener shows that. Just keep up the work you're putting in.

Expo: GMO (genetically modified organism) fruits are made by inserting gene sequences from other species. Google "Kool-Aid advertisments" if you don't get that one. In the Army, Corporal is a rank below Captain.

I felt that one came with an okay verse... although said verse seemed to be very stretched out and even somewhat broken as well. His opponent, however, came in with that fucking fire. Punchline game on fleek. I also appreciated his wordplay a lot better. 

Fairs in people.

Loser's verse was tight overall, like it was good but the winners verse was a bit better. I mean it would've been fire versing an average dude like me but you're versing shodan lmao.

Winner came with artillery man. I honestly thought the loser was gonna win when I read his but then I read this one and it kinda was obvious. The last line was a mad finisher.

MVGT: Shodan

Captain, you had a nice opener but after that ya fell off. Liked the beginning error code line but I felt the wording in the next line was a bit fucked up: 'give 'bro the l' like ya AIR QUOTE THE BROTHEL' - You said 'ya AIR QUOTE' - That seems like he's doing it, when you said you'd give him the L. I liked this idea tho, it was somethin I ain't seen. And just by lookin at it, I felt the next sheme could've been used way better, cos you had like an extra syllable there and that made shit choppy, and the idea in this bar wasn't really a hard-hitting one. The closer was better but could've executed in a better way, this idea was good but the execution wasn't. Overall a hit and miss verse with some errors that reduced the impact of your punchlines.

Shodan, the opener was dope. Reminds me of what I learned in high school lmao. Next line was ok, good execution. In the 'Dishwasher' bar imo the 2nd multi was a bit stretched compared to the other multis. Punch in this bar was nice but could've been directed more at Captain. Closer was good, liked the nameflip and how you kept shit relevant across the whole bar, punch landed quite well. Overall a nice verse, with more hits than misses.

Giving this one to Shodan, he was more consistent and didn't have as much faults in his verse as Captain did.

FIRE NATION

Shodan was better structured