Alzie got this more me and here's why: Erk your rhyming for the most part was solid, but it felt like it took you forever at times to get to the punchline (took you about 4 lines in your opener to get to it and the punch was just ok, imo). Same with your next punch (Als challenge one), and that's a bit of a reach because you spell his name like A-L-Z, not A-L-S. Repeating old crap jab was BATS cause it's just a goofy line, tbh. Your closer was easily your best punch and if you had used more lines like that this would've been a much better and a closer battle.

Alzie you had a jab or a punch in almost every one of your lines, which was good to see. Some were obviously stronger than others (really dug the opening jab because he had a few reaches in the verse so that really connected, but on the other end the projects sure to suck jab was a reach because the projects aren't sucking, the hood slut is, but the way you worded it made it seem like the projects were). Amateur witches line was creative and I hadn't heard that before so I liked, epitaph line hit hard even though it seemed played, it wasn't, so that's BOTB from both. College debts finished closer was cool. 

Overall, I felt it wasn't close, but was a good battle nonetheless.

PYW Semi Finals! Good luck, Alz.

Fv both were good but one was better for me 

Cuz I put an s and not a Z? Really? I called him Al? Jeez fucking sorry.

nothing crazy from either but alzie came with the cleaner more well written verse with a smoother flow and better wording  erk the als was an extreme reach. ur closer was pretty dope tho.. had u brought that level of material throughout u would've won but all the simple predictable stuff weakened ur verse. alz wasn't all too complex either but definitely was more readable