Sin.. Not bad for your first battle.. But I feel like alot of your shit was reaches and or nonsensical..go from a "Sexual Vacuum Cleaner" (whatever that is.. Cuz thats pretty forced my guy) then start talking about Ether.. Not to mention you rhymed it with itself. Then the next line you're back to the repetitive wording and allover the place with your concepts... Also you basically recycled when you went back to rhe demon swordsman lead a horsemen to poision water thing..Bnas, I feel like alot of this was just random.. The first two are barely punches. They have alright concepts I suppose but the wording just makes it seem like youre saying random shit man lol.. Also.. If you're gonna pronounce Pattern like Patter-In, you shpuld break the word apart (pat-ter-ren) but either way its pretty forced.... Overall, this is close.. Neither really had any battle content in there.. The punches thrown were pretty weak on both sides.. However, Im going to give my vote to SinaCog for having better concepts and the smoother, more enjoyable read. Fairs in guys

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