very close battle xylophagia couldve easily won if he carried on punching but thedopekid just about won both are improving quick

Dope, you had a good flow but i think you may have went a bit too crazy with your Multis. Overall your verse wasn’t super hard hitting but it was rapped well. X, da feet lines are extremely played out and you’ll come to learn are one of the most hated lines around here (and are usually only used ironically). Also, moccasin/mocking son is pretty rough so right out of the gate you came out flat. Rest of the way you had a couple cool ideas like the black crime stuff but I felt it wasn’t presented well, and your verse was really wordy in general. Both got potential though keep on trucking.

Yeah Edgeworth I know defeat bars are pretty hated but I just wanted to mess around with one, probably will never do one again 

good battle gents, fv no h8. im givin this to tdk for a more impactful verse

dopekid has to work on the order and capping of your set ups multis and punches. For me XY had some good lines but nothing like his usual? maybe he knew his opponents level i feel he came light the black crime line and stephen hawkins shit was funny and enough to win this comfortably GB BOTH NO H8