Edging this to MACC here with the overall better punches that showed a bit more creativity to them . Also worded his lines better in comparison to Gii . Gii you had some decent ideas but more often than not your wording was broken in a lot of areas and it just wasn't a natural read to me at all . I'd read up on how MACC words his lines and take pointers from that and elevate from here .

Gi, man idk if its your accent or what but your opener is really broken. Bout to Blast, Out Climax.. It just doesnt rhyme very well, and sane with doubt you fag, and so on. Ive seen an improvement though. Also try to tighten up your concepts a bit more, and thinking more outside the box.. Smacc, you opened with a broken multi as well.. It had a good concept though I enjoyed it lol but I feel like it didnt come off as hard as it couldve due to wording purposes.. Overall, I do need to give this to Smacc, he had fresher and more interesting concepts and executed them slightly better... Fairs in guys!

Both did their thing. I think the Med I send WP was the highlight here from both despite it not quiiiite working both ways. Also felt Macc was cleaner with his flow and more creative. Good stuff from both.

Ones bars here made more sense and had more impactful punches. Fairs in fellas salute

Gii wasnt that bad but i felt sMACCed edged tnis w/ more creative punches. FV no h8

MACC still bringing the heat I see. I don't feel much explantion is needed. One got bodied