Good luck dude

Next time try to come with some real tough rhymes*

,,,fmv

Taco, I feel like your simplicity killed the verse. Concepts were simple. Rhyming was simple.. There wasn't really anything that stood out to me. I was fairly disappointed. Fox, meh this was by far not your bestwork. That first line is so broken to shit "Go really Har"and "Flowyou retard" is an example. Like yes. Technically it rhymes, but if you say em out llud like "Go really Hard, Flow You Retard" it sounds broken and sounds forced.. Youpicked up steam towards the end. Overall, neither were impressive. However, RappinFox has my vote for having the better structure and throwing more punches then his opponent. Fairs in.

TACO HAD SOME OK IDEAS IN A FEW AREAS,  JUS NEED TO WORK ON STRUCTURING YOUR BARS OUT BETTER AN SET-UP PUNCHES PROPERLY FOR BETTER EXECUTION.  YOUR VERSE DIDNT HAVE ANY HIGHLIGHTS BUT THA FLOW WOZ ON POINT, CAN TELL YOU WROTE THIS QUICK AS THERE WERE ALOT OF LAZY PARTS........ RAPPINFOX HAD A MUCH CLEANER STRUCTURE AN CAPPED HIS RHYMES SO THA VERSE WAS EASIER TO FOLLOW, I DID LIKE YOUR ''EVER BEEN THAT COOL'' PART, BUT YOU DID HAVE A FEW BROKEN RHYMES IN THERE.  ALSO WAS A BIT CONFUSED WITH THA ''HARD RHYMES'' AND ''RISING SLUT'' MULTI RHYMES AS THEY DIDNT RHYME WITH ANYTHING........ ALL IN ALL FOX GETS MY VOTE AS HIS VERSE WAS BETTER STRUCTURED OUT, HE SET HIS PUNCHES UP BETTER AN HE HAD A MORE CONSISTANT VERSE WIT LESS LAZY ELEMENTS...... GL TO BOTH, FAIR IS DROPPED!

rappin slightly edged it w a bit more complexity....fv no h8 crime

One stay improving well the other is connecting his word play better then previously. Fairs in fellas keep doing yo thing

Fv