i refered to a particular US ttt show that aired from 1989-1993 at the end...i mentioned a concept that also refers to the exact name of that show. if u never herd of that particular show at da end look it up. also, im not satanist...this is just fantasy for the bars. GL anyone who takes this.

tv show/exact name of that character

thoughts-i shouldve said "send to your school dance instead of grandma that wooodve made more sense" ...

ya you too captain

Vulture,I enjoyed your opener but the wording was kind of off. From and Which sound so differently that using them as filler in a scheme kinda flows off the flow imo. It was almost a haymaker, but it was still a decent punch. Your entire verse was good with coherence though, which is a nice bonus. Gutpunch,  you had pretty clean rhyming all throughout, its definitely a strong point of yours.. However I feel like wording really affected your opener. Like.. You didn't start your punches scheme til late.. And before then you had 2 different very short schemes that seemed irrelevent to the punch.. The rest of the verse was pretty much the same... Overall, this is a close battle. However, Vulture gets my vote for being more cohesive and having better execution. Fairs in guys! 

fvmn

Gut punch improving steadily. Punches are getting dope. Vulture been going ham and eggs lately he hard to beat. Fairs in fellas salute to both