Should given me aheads up. Ill reply after work.

Everything should be self explanatory. Good luck man.

...Ops! :high:

Ight Sam.. First of all, never hit enter. Always fill the box and always capitalize ur rhymes. U used 2 syllable rhymes here when u should be shooting for 3 or more syllables if u wanna succeed. What is accapellaered? Last four lines didn't even insult ur opponent once. Hyped urself up then dissed the site.. U had no complexity so therefore no real punches. No hate my best advice for u is read some battles of some heavyweights on here and get an idea of what a verse should look like. No hate keep elevating.

ERK as for ur opener the first multi is 5 syllables and the 2 that follow it up are 4 which throws the flow. The concept of the punch itself was nice but would've been cooler had u used the Hannibal and lung eating setups before it rather than after.. Would've made it hit harder. But u are showing improvements with incorporating shit that's relevant to the theme of the punch. Idk what u were doing with that all street punch tho... What's it even mean? Questionable. That farmer line was just lazy.. Cmon erk. Super basic.. Ur dope man don't stoop to using stuff like that. On top of the simplicity, why would it matter if he can make beats? This a Rap battle not a production battle. Fag doesn't rhyme with Kay. Closer was super simple. Just keep working on complexity man.

Fairz in

bro ur so shit all u do is battle new comers fucking pussy bitch boy

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sam had potentiol to snipe the shit out of erk but didn try fv in

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