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hitze ur wp dont match da words ur displayin, i used to do this too for example,. lit the rate (literate, notice how theres no 'ter' in lit the rate) n u bold one word for a rhyme at the end kinda threw me off the flow. keep reading other battles n improve.

zakwon "shells" and "impale" dont rhyme exactly, quoting guys thats flames wat do u mean by that? do u mean hes reading other peoples raps that hot, i do like the "hitze got blitzed" pretty dope line, n sonic game on sega

my vote goes to the one who had more punches n more wp and was more comprehensive 

fv...no h8

Thanks for the feedback!

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Hitze u used too many 2 syllabke rhymes. U should always shoot for 3+ syllables. Also ur box isn't filled there's big gaps where u could've wrote more. Reaper doesn't rhyme with attacker and neither does gun star. U really gotta work on ur rhyming first and capitalize them. Missile though doesn't sound enough like mistletoe to work as wp same for illiterate and I lit the rate. Work on ur rhyming as well as more readable wordplay and complexity. Read some other battles to get an idea of what I mean.

Zakwon u got a better handle on rhyming. U show potential but u use some played material like the microwave thing and knuckles thing. Cool stuff but has been done a lot. Smooth flow just cry to be more outside the box and u you'll be well on ur way. Ik u pointed out this is a key style but always bring ur a game homie. 

Fairz in