expo-i decided to not use longer multi sylables cuz im tryna make simple n easier to read

expo- (forgive me for this verse, not tryna to male light n i was sad when i herd da news n now i wish i didnt put it in da verse in but Molly Tibbits was an Amerocan college student who was a fatal victim of an illegal immigrant n was buried in corn starch)

expo-"carnival" is also another word for fun fair, and fun fair can be shortened for just "fair"

expo-Erk was either ranked 1 or 2 but now hes number 4...

Erk, no hard feelings its just for rap battle fun...ur verse is pretty dope and ur very talented...GL

ERK good rhyming. Wasn't feeling the opener tho.. Master chief doesn't relate to counter strike in any way. If that's why ur saying it's useless (is because he's playing halo or whatever) then it's a reach at best. No hate. Charles and the queen line was cool imo.. Could've possibly been executed better. The whole food concept u went with was meh.. It was all over the place u went from ribs to cookies to onions.. Idk maybe with better wording this could've hit harder. I did like the sought aid wp and could've been dope af if in the right context. Closer was predictable as well but cool aggressive delivery nonetheless.

Vulture u shouldt settle for 2 syllable rhymes homie. Hot shit line was okay but very basic. Molly tibbets line lacked any wordplay. Just a straight forward simple weak jab. Closer was confusing.. Wym lift a carnival over his head? I see what u were trynna do and u Def have potential but wording brought that closer down. Aside from this 2 syllable rhymes, good rhyming.

Both needs work on creativity but pretty dope battle here fairs in

Much respect to both