Prove Your Worth Week 4!

Erk, ur opener fell flat imo. I didn't exactly get it.. Weird wording. Better wording could've helped its impact. Puberty struck thing was nice wp but puberty doesn't really destroy a kid. It just destroys their singing voice sometimes lol. The whole boxing concept was pretty nice.. I like how there was relevant boxing bits in the setup which added impact to that final punch. Last line was predictable but a decent Lil closer. 

Tongan I liked the delivery of the opener but idk where's the creativity. Whole "ate" bit was played out and a reach.. Not very creative with that one. Chunk chank was funny tbh but I'm not seeing any actual impact to it. Maybe better execution could've helped add some aggression and made the punch harder. Slippin and stains appear was nice but the rest of the closer was very basic and lacked any creativity.

Overall nice rhyming from both and pretty clean flow. Fairz in keep it up

i think erk edged this one for me, that "repeated abuse" line was fire...fv  

Prove Your Worth: Week 4

I felt ones flow here was hard to match while the other swung more punches. Fairs in fellas both were dope. Salute