Alright since this ain't got a vote on it I'll drop one . Shodan got this with relative ease even thought he took an eternity to get to his first punchline, and even that wasn't all that good of one (dating app for communists seems very far fetched, my guy), but the strength of your ending lines is what gave you the win here with an end punch that was pretty damn good for sure . Villiann had some decent rhyming but overall had a lot of reaches in his punchlines, and a lot of weird instances of speaking in the 3rd person that are just kind of strange (you've never battled Shodan before yet you say you've beat him ? Nah man it doesn't work like that .) The whole Baron/Bear in mind while trying to tie in to the whole Corbin angle from the previous line was a TOTAL reach . You didn't really set up the punch properly in the first place, which meant no one was going to know who you were referring to unless they looked at your expo . Same thing goes for graphing a fetus for causes . I have never in my life heard of graphing a fetus (I even Google searches to make sure I'm not just ignorant and I found nothing), so what you've posted makes absolutely no sense, to me . The Dan Marino line was alright, but if that was your strongest line here then it wasn't enough to win against Shodan .

*Google searched

Honestly, this is a pretty even battle both guy's brought the same amount of punches and both were creative in their own way which neither really over powered each other. Might come back for another read and vote but as of now look's like a draw therefore a vote to just one party would be invaild in my option at the moment 

The Fire Nation.

Shodan, that opener was hot, and I enjoyed it quite a bit I just feel like jt was kinda stretched out.. Dope ass concept and a great punch too boot I just feel like you couldve shortened it and it still wouldve been a good bar. The rest was pretty cool, all your concepts were fresh and portrayed quite well.. Villiann, you seemed to struggle with wording in some spots. I enjoyed the concept behind the corbin's tux line but I dont like how long you dragged out that inner scheme, it made me feel like you were on a new one, then all of the sudden back to it. It just read kinda choppy because of this. Overall, Im giving this to Shodan for fresher concepts and better execution, I feel like wording made Villiann's read a bit choppier 

And made it unable for him to project his punches as well. Sorry I accidently clicked comment lmao fairs in guys!

Barely edges it out. Much respect to both of you