Saiyan takes this one despite threatening to Butch(?) the opponent. On aggregate he had harder punches and way better rhyming and structure whereas Death had more of a cypher verse with not a lot of coherency or attack. Fv.

I think Villain should win. Although, I participated, I just joined today...

I was thinking I was a little of the subject.

TD, I feel like you didnt really throw any punches at all.. Like calling the sewer his mother? Not very creative and doesn't constitute as an actual punch... Villian, both punches seemed dragged out a bit to much for an 8. That being said, their not bad at all.. Solid hit with decent enough execution. Overall, theres a clear winner. TD just got outclassed completely

Thanks for the tips and just so u know I am a kid, now dont make fun of me, but rapping eachother, I find it amusing. LOL!

One lacked any real punch power behind his work, leading to a crushing snipe

Tactical.. None of ur verse rhymed homie. Tjats rule one.. U have to rhyme. Not only that, but ur rhymes need to be more thsn one syllable and u need to capitalized them. Seems as tho u tried to insult ur opponent here but the wording was choppy af and nothing hit. U were just talking. No hate but u gotta hear these things to improve. Read some battles around the site and get a better idea of how to construct a verse. Dont give up. 

Villain i liked the closer. Everything else was more or less played out or too predictable like the touchdown line and the divorce one. I knoe u can do better and was pretty much playing down to the competition but always bring ur a game. Great multies tho. Clean flow. Just try and use more creative - less played out concepts. Good shit overall..

villian won