Neither really had any stand out material so it was hard to judge. I went with Grimey because he had a less choppy flow and slightly more enjoyable. Fairs in

Hmm not much to say here. Both need work. Leave it at that. I think the winner got this from trying a cunt hair more. Fairs in..

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Bishal.. Where do i start. First of all alot of ur shit didnt even rhyme.. And when it did it was one syllable.. That aint gonna work here homie. Ur rhymes should all be multi syllabic. Also u need to capitalize ur rhymes.. And never hit enter on thr keyboard. Always fill ur box. Also,,, i didn't really see any punches here.. Merely just weak insults with no complexity at all. Read some battles around thr site to get a feel for what a verse should look like. Dont give up homie keep at it. 

Grimey u took this one with better flow, slightly better rhyming and a bit better attempt at punches. Some of ur rhymes were single syllable as well.. Dont do that homie make them all multi syllabic.. Preferably 3 or more. As i told bishal, capitalize ur rhymes always. U did lack complexity here.. Work on building a clever punchline and set it up with terms or phrases related to thr theme of that punch. 

Fairz in guys. Keep grinding